Tuesday, 20 August 2019
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ReplyDeleteHi Kaitlyn I'm Kayla from Mangapapa School and I am in room 14.I really like the way how you told us it can actually can impact the Environment.I made me think of a time when we did the kind of stuff for inquiry and I made a slide of water and air Pollution.
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Kaitlyn.Resario here from Mangapapa School.Iḿ really impressed on what you have posted up.I think this post is helpful for others because your basically asking people to stop polluting.And that's a good thing because our turtles have the right to live.Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Kaitlyn , My name is Peyton from Mangapapa School and im in Room 14 , I love how you explanation on how Toxic Chemicals Is affecting our Environment and Saying what will happen after our Air is Polluted . I like how you Gave us some really good Ideas of how to get away from the Air Pollution and Giving me really good Points by helping us with that situation . I Actually have something really similar that i'm doing for my speech but mines about water Pollution and youve gave my some really good points to put on my speech .
ReplyDeleteHi kaitlyn, My name is kiana and I am a student at mangapapa School,Gisborne. I really like how you put a picture and facts in your post it really made it stand out. I agree that air pollution is harmful to the environment.
ReplyDeletekia ora Kaitlyn my name is Romie from Mangapapa School. I really liked how you told us lot's of information about air pollution. It made me think of how we can stop air pollution. Thank you for posting!
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Hello kaitlyn,My name is Aylee I am from student mangapapa school,Gisborne.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you organise your ideas different sections,Also I liked how you said how animals can be affected by it too.Its great that you include a picture to bring your presentation all together.I agree that air pollution is harmful to the environment
hi kaitlyn
ReplyDeletemy name is mikayla from mangapapa school in room 14 and have read your post and it was great and and I totally agree with it also the post stood out to me. if you want to see my blog it is https://mikaylaslearning.blogspot.com/
Hi Kaitlyn,
ReplyDeleteI'm Maddy from Mangapapa School in room 14. I really like how you explained what the problem is with air and water pollution, I also like that you said how we can fix it. This is really great help. We have also been doing this kind of stuff for our inquiry, we did a title page about sustainability.
Hi Kaitlyn,Great persuasive writing about all those evil smoke clouds that will be the death of us.I really like your piece of writing because its eye catching with all of the bright colors.With all that information people should really read your blog and then the trees will win the fight to give us some lovely clean air.I also learned quite a bit that smoke has some poisonous partacls hidden in amongst all the thick smoke and cloud.
ReplyDeletecome check out my blog at https://finncslearning.blogspot.com/,
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Hi I'm Brandon I really like the way you showed a picture of the smoke coming out of a factory and that your warning people about whats hapening to earth .Have you heard of global warming?
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ReplyDeleteI'm Kelly from Mangapapa school.I really like your post about air pollution.Have you thought about maybe put more info into a new slide so people can get more information about your post.I like how you said that we should use automatic cars so we don't have to use so much gas.here is the link to my blogspot https://kellycslearning.blogspot.com/
Hi Kaitlyn my name is Maddisyn and I go to mangapapa school. Wow that is amazing how you explained how toxic chemicals is affecting our environment. I'm amazed that you got all that infomation.
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